Also my story is about a twister, and people surviving, any suggestions what I could put at the end? instead of just saying they'd survived. like perhaps a twist or a moralWhats the oposite of the word 'overpowering' ? need some more words also?
irresistable might be what you want.Whats the oposite of the word 'overpowering' ? need some more words also?
You should not use a copulative structure and adjective at all. "X was Y" can work, but it takes a master like Kurt Vonnegut to pull it off (of an attacking dog鈥?quot;His eyes were pinwheels. His slobber was cyanide."). Always use an active verb, something like "The smell of steak filled the air." or "The smell of steak permeated the house." or something like that.
You should start by having in mind what you want your story to say. Think of some aspect of life you know about, and make your ending about that. For instance, you could make the survivors brothers, and arrange your story such that the reason they survived was that they learned to trust each other.Whats the oposite of the word 'overpowering' ? need some more words also?
How about feeble?
steak was mouth watering, dominant, inviting, welcoming, tempting.
'So the twister was twisted, no money was lost and when he came out of gaol at least X citizens would be keeping an eye on him.'
Doesn't spell checker pop up at your end. you deserve to serve a sentence.
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