Thursday, February 2, 2012

Can u rewrite these two statments in a more descriptive word choice?

1. The main point of the piece is that nobody can come up with a solution.



2. He is trying to make us think about poor kids and their problems, we need to get a grasp on beggars because they are everywhere and that the kids following their moms will grow up and beg to. So in a sick and twisted way he is trying to get rid of kids by cooking an eating them to solve the problem.Can u rewrite these two statments in a more descriptive word choice?
Doing a little Johnathon Swift homework? I would re-write these into a single sentence: "When all the 'nice' solutions are rejected, it seems cannibalism is culturally and economically efficient.

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