Thursday, February 2, 2012

Help finding a positive word for overpowering? also some story writing hints x?

I'm writing a short story and I wrote a sentance saying "The smell of steak was overpowering". I then realised 'overpowering' is a negative word lol. What I wanted it to mean was the smell was really good. What word can be used instead of 'overpowering' that's positive??



Also my story is about a twister, and people surviving, any suggestions what I could put at the end? instead of just saying they'd survived. like perhaps a twist or a moralHelp finding a positive word for overpowering? also some story writing hints x?
I'd suggest the word "intoxicating", but try getting a thesaurus, which is kind of like a dictionary.



Possible ending: As they sifted through the rubble rescuing bits of their belongings, they also began the task of sifting through their lives.



Hard to come up with an ending without knowing the story though. Good luck with it.Help finding a positive word for overpowering? also some story writing hints x?
Just to help you out, you can use these tools to help you think of synonyms in the future:



SHIFT + F7

thesaurus.com



For the ending... perhaps not letting everything live on and be completely happily-ever-after. There's always devastation with tornadoes and that should show, although don't end it on a depressing note.Help finding a positive word for overpowering? also some story writing hints x?
Irresistible, alluring, mouth-watering, enticing, appealing...
appetizingly pungent..

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